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The Most Influential Person in History
There are many people who are great enough to influence people in history. They may be scientists, politicians, creators, and so on. Now I want to talk about the person who created the wonderland of people, no matter they are children or adults, Walter Elias Disney.
Walter Elias Disney was born in Chicago, US. He was a creator of the famous cartoon characters, for example, the most famous one, Mickey Mouse. Besides, I believe that everyone has seen the cartoon “Snow White,” and “Beauty and the Beast,” those are his creations. He had a childlike mind even when was a grown-up. One day, he got ideas of building a wonderland to entertain people, hoping to give children and adult a happy time. Mr. Disney drew many cartoons and made them into films. After he was successful in the cartoons career, he had a dream to build another real wonderland for people. Then, Disneyland Resort was on construction soon. Now, we had 6 Disneyland Resorts in the world, 2 located in US, 2 in Japan, 1 in Paris and 1 in Hong Kong. His dream came true and the dream really brings people entertainment.
Because of him, we have the most interesting amusement parks where people can enjoy the beautiful music produced to accompany the cartoons, the techniques to make it more interesting and money-making animation industry, and the most important point, the magic power to entertain people.
written by Laney
COMMENTS: Good, but you have many run-on sentences!
There are many people who are great enough to influence people in history. They may be scientists, politicians, creators, and so on. Now I want to talk about the person who created the wonderland of people, no matter they are children or adults, Walter Elias Disney.
Walter Elias Disney was born in Chicago, US. He was a creator of the famous cartoon characters, for example, the most famous one, Mickey Mouse. Besides, I believe that everyone has seen the cartoon “Snow White,” and “Beauty and the Beast,” those are his creations. He had a childlike mind even when was a grown-up. One day, he got ideas of building a wonderland to entertain people, hoping to give children and adult a happy time. Mr. Disney drew many cartoons and made them into films. After he was successful in the cartoons career, he had a dream to build another real wonderland for people. Then, Disneyland Resort was on construction soon. Now, we had 6 Disneyland Resorts in the world, 2 located in US, 2 in Japan, 1 in Paris and 1 in Hong Kong. His dream came true and the dream really brings people entertainment.
Because of him, we have the most interesting amusement parks where people can enjoy the beautiful music produced to accompany the cartoons, the techniques to make it more interesting and money-making animation industry, and the most important point, the magic power to entertain people.
written by Laney
COMMENTS: Good, but you have many run-on sentences!
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