Sentiment

Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How could you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.

If some one sent me a plot of land, I would like it to be located in Taichung city and it has had fifty thousands square meters. In Taiwan, we have just one good musical hall in Taipei, so I would like to use my land to build an opera house in central Taiwan.

Regarding The famous opera houses in the world, they are also great works like of arts. For example, the Sydney Opera House in one of the architectural wonders of the world. I hope the one in Taichung city is like that. In Taichung's opera house, it should have a music hall, a theater and some exhibition rooms. Besides, it has a large parking lot for the visitors.

The music hall is a professional place so I need an expert to understand the acoustical sounds and design the room. No matter where people sit, they can hear clearly. The theater is for drama programs. It should have a large an enough platform to make good use of(?). Many dramas need a big and deep stage to perform, but in Taiwan, we lack those places. In the exhibition rooms, we can appreciate many fine arts in it. The art may be ancient or contemporary. I want the opera house to be a nice place for people to be embraced by music, art and drama.

These are my broad thoughts about the opera house. If I owned such a place and had a lot of capital, I would do that. Because I hope more and more people to be touched by the field of art, that's my initial purpose. 

Comments: Good, but use of "if" /conditional tense grammar